I don't see anything out of ordinary
good piece, clean nice line work in some cases, the words within the drips are a nice touch- but it feels stiff, I don't get the expression out of it, I feel no reaction.
Just a good picture. I like it though it shows skill in your talents, keep going at it, I am keeping an eye on your work:)
Thank you! This is the first constructive criticism that I've received and it's much appreciated!
just cause
I ignore the fact of the characters names,
I only like this because it has emotion, it states something familiar, being human.
cool
I will be waiting to see what you come up with,
the story sounds interesting, when do you think you will release this?
I would like to read it as well :)
Thank you very much Sevens, you might have just gave me a good reason to translate the 4 chapters I've wrote so far to English in order to publish them at NewGrounds, of course, if you have a good and easy-going fluent Spanish-speaking friend to have her/him to translate it for you, you can find it at my blog, entitled Neo-Aztlan (google-friendly) hehehe, greetings and thanks again.
I can dig this!
I like this!
cool!
the use of colors are good, the imagination or thought is quite magical-
what I feel from this is mixed, I do not feel tension nor anger. it is just as.
do what you do
Your good at this kind of style.
use of color
I love your use of colors, and your line work. controlled.
it is your art
Your style and your imagination, draw what you want and let it be the way it is.
Good that you stay true to what you like.
You brought it down to the point very well =)
I like that
The colors and the shapes you used go well together, this looks like a fun piece!
yeah it was fun making it
thanxx alot!
like your sprite
You have fluid movement with this one.
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