Sevens's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[salad fingars]

Salad Fingers eh

I like the mood that was captured with the subject, dark, trippy, and univiting.
Cool bro, I like it.
5/5

[Rockbabe Classic Roll]

Sexy

I like this.

[AFK in Durotar]

sexy

I saw that attractive face, and didn't know what I was going to see-
I like your clean line work and coloring, this is nice bro.
good job you get a 5/5

[FREE - Xmas Angel]

this is a "nice" drawing

The problem though is your angle or so your approach- she looks very stiff and unnatural, there is no soul or emotion to this piece, how long does it take you to do a single drawing? It takes me a few days to do a large painting, and an hour or less to do a digital image. Have you used Photoshop? Or paint shop pro? those are great suggestions to your work, the shading and gradients would make your work with more impact. The anatomy, you need alot of work, I mean you have the right idea on your subjects, but they lack emotion or life, movement.
How long have you been drawing? well practice more, and make your work with some flow- your a good artist.

Linhishyra responds:

Ouch, that hurts, hehehe, it takes me about a week, on different grades of effort a day,, but I get it, never worked on propietary-tools 'cause I'm a freewarer (Linux rocks! but GIMPs interface just creeps me out so I don't do post-edition) taking your advice into account I might start to learn that kind of tools, I really apreciate your comments, this is the kind of criticism I need, very detailed and a little...mmm...cruel, (I know its just cold, just kiddin') Thankyou very much fot your points of view. Thank you!

[LIH - Linhhni sees Liiwnhi die]

do you have an idea world?

I see where you are coming from on that note.

Linhishyra responds:

Well I must admit I didn't quite understand the saying you used about "where I'm coming from", but yout title and mark gave me an idea, thank you very much, specially since it comes from a great artist as your self, best regards Sevens!! :3

[HS - Di Lay]

i see your pose....

I see the pose your trying to acquire, you should of given her head more of weight value- her proportions are nice but stiff.
The angle should of been chosen better, if this were concept art I can understand that this piece is a practice piece, if you were trying to capture weight you could of been more delicate with her, carry her onto those sheets with life, give her more flow.
but you have skill

Linhishyra responds:

Yet again, thanks, this one is an oldie that gone from pencil to digital about a year ago, but now encouraged by your comment, the 7rafe7's one and the lessons I've learned so far about coloring effects made on Inkscape, I shall try to re-make this one, of course taking in to account that weight issue you mentioned and which I really agree upon, this time, may the Wacom be with me!, Thank you very much.

[Freddie Krueger "Dog version"]

nice!

I like this one, on many reasons.
it has a dark edge to it and so ashcan like, and it is fuckin awesome!

inesive responds:

hehe, thank you ^^

[Optic Matrix]

it looks like it could be a nice piece

i wish i could see a better pic of this, other than that is this an academic piece?
very student like, but it looks like it has potential to be okay.
if it were a better photo i think i could see what it is.